I meant to review this much sooner.
For the good!
Nice choice of music! really like the drums for this.
Ok good! backgrounds! This is one of your better detailed works.
Now, I think it would be a good idea to read the principals of animation. There is still room for improvement (as with me). But I can tell you that it may be easier for you to do pose to pose animation then between. This will make your animaitons better. Also, you need more in betweening for your cycles.
Keep it up.
Thank you for the constructive review. I am working on a new movie. I am trying to practice my animation skills. It is not easy.
What I am going to say is supposed to build you up, not tear you down.
I feel that more work should go into this. It feels kind of rushed, as I have seen some of your other work. There are times where there is no background. The times you did use backgrounds were MUCH better when it was just black and white!
Your characters could use more frames of animation as well. An example is when they man is flying, and his wings doesn't flap.
I have a few questions. Is there a message to this? And the twerking fairy...Did she fart at the end?? comedy gold if she did.
Anyway, keep at it and take your time!
Thank you for viewing. The message is he is a superhero who caught a bank robber after the dragon lady feeds him this powerful soup that makes him strong and able to fly. He also has powerful eyes that help him to see more than the average person could ever see. Yes, she farts at the end. Thanks for the music. It took two weeks to make in my spare time.
I seen this coming, but I still got a laugh out of it...Especially when he didn't put his hands up. WHOA! Good stuff man.
Fun game. The concept is simple, and its like a "avoid obsticals" game. The Rag doll is the twist though, and makes things more interesting. So does the power ups, and the "power ups". I think its kinda funny though that if his hand slightly touches the ceiling, it snaps off his body.
Anyway, nice game.
Brillant game! I've never would have thought of playing as a "mario enemy".trying to stop the "player". I really like your art style, espcially the last character you play as. Nice work!
A good game! My only complaint is that its a little floaty, but its other than that, its fun!
Long time ET!
It's so sad =(...well at first until the drums and bass kicks in! Then it starts sounding something like a ending theme, or a base. But its not a bad thing at all. Like the way its made. Also its nice the way it ended. Nice work as usual
A well thought out song in more ways than one! the intro is pretty good to the build is pretty good. Its cool how the piano starts alone then more accompanied instruments come instruments come into the mix. It just fits together so well. I listened to this while reading your description, and it fits it! This isn't a complant or anything, and I'm not telling you how you should make your songs, but I feel this would be a great loop! it ends the same way as it starts. It could symbolize what you said, but once it loops, its like creating another life.
My only complaint about this song is that it feels alot louder in my right ear than the left. Other than that great!
Keep it up!
Fun to listen to it. Can tell you had a blast. The rhythm is fun, and all parts are composed well. But I do have some complaints. Mixing needs work...sounds are peaking way too much. Although the rhythm is nice, it could use more variation.
Thx for listening and feedback, and yeah i'm hoping to get fl studio since I use Lmms.
Nice work. Really like the color scheme.
Thanks a lot, Eric!
I'm in love with those colors as of late. I might even have to force myself to vary, hahaha
Cool gif! Nice detail with the floors and walls especially. But for some reason, all I can imagine now is a TV flying around the place shooting it up lthanks to the description!
Hahahaha, that would be awesome!
I really like this picture Stop. It's like something off a Poster! Nice work!
Thanks, man! I appreciate it d:
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